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Cheers luv,
Thanks for that fucking kiss.
The one that changed my life - in an instant.

Thanks for the heads-up
That 2 years later I’d be holding a knife to my heart
And a gun to yours.
Fuck the knife to the wrist – scars heal. My heart won’t

And I remember that kiss so well.
One on the cheek A second one on the other
And then The Kiss.

And my God... that Kiss. That. Kiss.

I would live that Kiss again a thousand times over.

Feeling breathless. “I’ve kissed an Angel”
Feeling restless “I want to kiss her again”

You took a piece of me when we met like that, when our lips met in an embrace..
©2006-2009 ~subliminal-cause
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Pain is love and love is Pain ... this is unfinished. Comments welcome...

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:iconplanetaryfox:
Good. Needs to be finished though. It leaves the reader wanting more.

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"Only when you cannot take something back do you begin to doubt the inital idea"-Forced Redemption [link]
:iconscarlettearsrundry:
Holy.
Fuck.

<< I.
Want.
More.

Very good.
I envy you it

*Fave*

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"Is that a nipple in your ear?"
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One of the many reasons Kathleen and I shouldn't wear corsets ><;;
:iconsubliminal-cause:
:) thanks. Have you got anything to add to it? I know it's unfinished...but the event is also unfinished :S
:iconsubliminal-cause:
:O u really like it? *embarrassed* ... really?? :| what do you like about it?
:iconscarlettearsrundry:
"Thanks for the heads-up
That 2 years later I’d be holding a knife to my heart
And a gun to yours.
Fuck the knife to the wrist – scars heal. My heart won’t"

Thats.. exactly how I feel at the moment and you conveyed it so clearly to me.

I like the brutally honesty, and the blunt tone. I love ittttt.

And thanks for the watch ^^

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"Is that a nipple in your ear?"
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One of the many reasons Kathleen and I shouldn't wear corsets ><;;
:iconsubliminal-cause:
that's what i wanted it to be like. I wanted the brutality to be the 'thing' about this one. And i was thinking if there should be more?

what do you think? more, or is it fine as it is?
:iconscarlettearsrundry:
Sometimes, when you try and add more to something, you take away from what you already have.

Don't force it.

I think its perfect the way it is.

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"Is that a nipple in your ear?"
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One of the many reasons Kathleen and I shouldn't wear corsets ><;;
:iconsubliminal-cause:
:) i wudn't say perfect. But thank you :)
:iconscarlettearsrundry:
As close to perfect as you ever get then ^^

You're welcome

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"Is that a nipple in your ear?"
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One of the many reasons Kathleen and I shouldn't wear corsets ><;;

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